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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 1, 2006 18:05:29 GMT 2
OK, Heres The Deal Guys ! I'm Going Away For A Week To Tunisia On The 9th Of July, so I'll Be returning On The 16th. While I'm Not Here, I'll need Someone To Look After Neverending For A Week. IF I Think You Done A Great Job, I'll Keep Whoevers Chosen To Become a GLOBAL MOD. So, Heres What ya Gotta Do.. I'm Gonna Make It Easy To Understand, Seeing its the first audition.. BUT THAT DON'T MEAN YOU CAN GIVE A LAZY POST ! This has gotta be an amazing post, its gotta be fantastic ! So, you have till the 8th Of July to Post your Chosen Charries History as best you can.. I'll Be Looking At: - Quality Of The Post
- Spelling And Use Of Vocabulary
- Design, Make It Stand Out in Italics, Fonts, Etc !
OK, So, If Theres Any Problems With That, Get back to me. Remember, You ALSO Gotta Be A Nice member, And As Active as you can be ! I Gotta Trust Ya ! Thanks a lot guys ! ~ Eilidh ( Administrator ) P.S. You Don't have to Audition If Ya Don't Wanna !
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Post by |ღ|Crime Sence|ღ| on Jul 5, 2006 9:11:30 GMT 2
The Three Lords Of Spirit Stood In front of A Model. A Foal Of Eve. Lord Zeus and Lord Aqua Crafted The Shape and And Texture Of This Fine Form Wild Lord Flames Created The Personality and Spirits This Life Form Be Hold-ed. And Walo Pacific Waters Was Created, June 4th, 2004. She Had Ben Blessed The Blood Of Friesian But The Heart Of A Arabian. Soon Her Dam, Isado Would Give Birth To This Daughter Of Eve. The Night Was Warm and The Summer Sun Had Set The Shine Behind The Mountains. Isado Was laid Pon The Sodden Giving Birth To Waters. Once This Little Flicka Had Taken Its First Breath Her Sire Was At Side To Remark This Blessing Of Eve. Razmon Gave The Name Pacific Waters for She Had Been Given To Lord Life On A Sandy Beach. Her Sire and Dam Never Thought Waters Would Be As Pure Hearted As She Was. The Wobbly Legs Soon Turned Strong and Firm and Waters Moved On To Her First duo Beat. Her Wet Nape Was Braced With A Ebon Draping That Stood Strait and Wavy Pon The Bridge Of Her Boa. Isado Soon Pressured The Flicka To Move On The A Three Beat. She Chough On Quickly. Her Parents Hoped For Her To Lead A Normal Life But At The Young Age of Only 6 Weeks War Stuck Between Light 'Quines And Darq 'Quines. She Was Left With No one. She Duo Beated In The Open Field Where Battle Had Taken The Life Of Many, Including Her Sire's.
ღ|"Daddy! Mommy! Where Are You!?"|ღ
Waters's Tiny, Squeaky Vocals Were Not Answered. Crystal Tears Moved Down Her Beautiful Cascade. She Was All Alone. After Her First Night Of Being Alone She Had To Try The Sweet Blades Below. At First She Spat Them Out and Stuck out her Tongue Hating The Taste But She Thought Of How She Would Not Carry On The Life Line Of Her Family If She Did Not Live. She Try-ed Again and soon Got Used To The Emerald Blades. Going Though Her First Winter Alone Was Rough. The Blizzards Of Snow Were Painful And Sad. This Was Her Only Skinny Stage. After Sring Had Come Her Form Was Changing. She Was Working Her Build More and More Making It Become Buffer. She Was Getting The Form of A Young Vixen. Her Banner And Plume Had Grown and Her Pistons As Well. Went Her First Birthday Had Come She Had Met A Nother 'Quine Of Her Blood. A Colt, Storm Was Said To Be Perfect But Later Came When He Just Disappeared On Waters. She Took Nothing Of Her Old Friend Leaving And Moved On. Later On As Fall Began Her First Heat Happened. Many Brutes Started To Follow Her and Some Try-ed To Force A Spell Of Foliage Apon Her But She Was Lucky And Succeed With No Spawn To Carry. Winter Blew In and Waters Finally Had A Home To Stay Warm In, Along With A Bear. She Lived With Blue Until Spring Erupted Then She Contused On Her Journey For Path Day. The Seasons Pasted And The Leafs Of The Oak Tree Fell Again. A Brute Was Finally Successful. She Was Carrying A Spawn at The Vary Young Age of Two Summers. The Foal Was Crafted But Died Soon After Birth From The Cold Winter. Waters Mother Sense Had Been Locked Onto Her and This Was A Nother Sorrowful Remark In Her Novel. She Learned That It Was Common To Lose You're First Spawn So She Moved On. She Finally Entered Theses Lands Of NeverEnding. But Her Journey Did Not End There. It Was Late Summer, and Waters Had Reached Path Day. This Is Where Her History Ends For It Is Yet To Be Wrote.
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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 5, 2006 13:11:05 GMT 2
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Post by |ღ|Crime Sence|ღ| on Jul 6, 2006 0:01:56 GMT 2
TY!!! I luffes The Site! That Surprizingly Was Eazy To Write! lolz
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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 6, 2006 17:34:05 GMT 2
It Was Well Worth It, I Really like it ! Thanks a lot By The Way ! I'm so Glad u joined - I've got such top members on here !
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Post by |ღ|Crime Sence|ღ| on Jul 6, 2006 21:54:13 GMT 2
Lolz!
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Post by joker on Jul 7, 2006 1:21:19 GMT 2
One might wander what had Joker has gone through to get to be the stag he is.Well it all started out on a rainy day out in a blissful meadow.It was a raining quite hard but the mare found no shelter.So she sought out the longest grass to keep her baby warm.She settled in a spot.She then went through the birth process and out came a beautiful baby boy.He was covered in gold brown splotches everyone on his muscled bodice.His mane was small but flew with the wind around him.His mother smiled,obviously proud of her son.She got up on weak pillars.She nudged her lad. The colt tried to get up,but his pillars just buckled beneath him and twisted with each other.Soon enough,he could find the soothing warmth of the grass.Though,this colt was very determined.He would get this right.Pushing with everything he had,though not much,he Finlay made it to his legs.His pillars were wobbly and out of balance,but he made it.He looked to his mama,and then instinct drawn him to her belly.He looked along and found the rich milk he had been searching for.He suckled for just a bit and then yawned.His mother nuzzled her son and layed him down.As joker Slept,there was something in the depths of the shadows.As the night withheld on,and the rain ceased the colt woke up.He was surprised his mother was gone.Well he looked around,scared to death.He then found her corpse on the ground.It was not a pretty sight.And it scarred Joker for all of his life.He had not known his father.but he presumed dead.Joker,the lonely orphan,trudged on.He soon found a cave,in witch he rested.Tears streaming from his orbs.He was left alone in this cold,cruel world.Joker sniffed and cried the rest of that night.The world pushed the little one to the edge,so now he was pushing back.As we continue on we come to his Yearling years.
Now,we meet our yearling at the cave of witch he had started out in.He was now taller and more built.He had lots of muscles for pushing back to the world that deprived him of everything he had known,or not known I should say.He was just eating his meal,just hanging out.It was time for his nap.AS he was sleeping an old stag in need of help,awoke him.That was a bad thing on the old stags account.The colt snorted and kicked sand up and then started kicking.Soon the old stag lay there,dead.Joker shook his head,what had he done!All the horses stared at him in disbelief and cowered away in fear.Joker shook his head more,and then ran off.Running farther and father into the darkness.The shadows took him in and comforted him.He was trembling,how could he kill a fellow Equine,in search of help at that.From then on,he felt no reason to live.He felt no sorrow or pity on himself.He walked by himself,and himself only.He felt as if even his shadow were not there.He was all alone,and he knew it.It was like the joker in the card game,thrown out because of difference and no value.
Now we are at his later years,now we are here at the time of his arrival.Joker has been walking alone for some time now,all alone no one beside him,not even his shadow.His shadow felt shame to not even consider following along side him.He was shunned on for many years.Though,some Equines felt pity and sorrow for him,he felt nothing for them.When they tried to help,they were discarded.If you look into his emerald eyes you can see not only a laughing stock,but a cry for help.You see him as the little foal he once was,a cry of innocence you hear.But Joker feels no need for help,he seeks revenge but also seeks peace.Either way,watch out because The Joker of Hearts is here,and he's coming for you. [/color]
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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 7, 2006 13:33:13 GMT 2
Wowee ! This is gonna be SO hard to pick If anyones making an audition, then they've got 'till tomorrow to do so Then I'll announce the winner.. And I'm NOT looking forward to choosing between such amazing posts !!!
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Post by joker on Jul 7, 2006 16:26:11 GMT 2
thank you,man this is hard to compete with all these great Rper's
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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 7, 2006 23:58:36 GMT 2
Yeh, Tell me about it LOL Its even harder as Admin But It makes RPing Loads more fun and interesting, cos This place is PACKED with great, advanced RPers, You included joker !
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Post by joker on Jul 8, 2006 4:11:25 GMT 2
Really?Me?Wow,I'v never been considered an advanced Rper befoure.My largest post ever made was about 500 words long,or lettters can't reamember,words yeah words.Thank you,it goes very appriceiated.
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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 8, 2006 10:32:48 GMT 2
Yup ! You sure are ! Your posts are always well in grammar, context and good length Its Always Quality, Not Quantity, With Me ! Thats kinda LIke my Motto LOL
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Lolli POP
New To The Land
T-I-double-geh-er!!!!
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Post by Lolli POP on Jul 8, 2006 15:42:04 GMT 2
*peeks in room* hello yalll these posts are so amazing id never be able to do that big of a post maybe if i was wrighting a story cause iv written a long long story before =] but never one big post its imposible for me to do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my brain would esplode lol....
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Post by [×]..§tårrÿ.Éÿêð..[×] on Jul 8, 2006 18:42:43 GMT 2
OK, The Results are up peeps ! And theres a slight twist to them.. Because it was sooooo impossible to decide, and both of them were amazing RPers, I have decided to make both Crime Sense and Joker Moderators for a week, and see how things go. When I get back, and see how well a job they have done, I may keep you both Moderators on a permanent basis. CONGRATULATIONS BOTH OF YOU !
I am counting on both of you to look after the site well, and not mess up anything. This is me passing on my utmost trust to you both, please respect that. But I know I shouldnt even have to say that to ya, your both awesome.
I Will PM Both of ya with details that are required of Moderators!
congrats again !
Eilidh x ~ Admin x
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Post by joker on Jul 8, 2006 21:56:09 GMT 2
Thank you,you will not be let down.Me will do my bestest.
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